Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Friday, 13 June 2014

Fairytale Cartoons

Room 3 have been working VERY hard to get their fairytales written and then transformed into cartoons. (A few have not quite finished.) This is our first attempt...we hope you enjoy them.

Luke

Ethan

Maddox

Jack

Lilly

Sarah

Oscar

Amber

Kimberley

Charlotte

Kahn

Wednesday, 16 April 2014

Blyton Poems

If you have almost 10 minutes to spare please watch our video and listen to us narrating our poems!


Thursday, 10 April 2014

Enid Blyton Book Reviews

At last - our book reviews on our favourite Enid Blyton book, which look fantastic hanging up in Room 3. LOTS of work has gone into writing them, not to mention the art of tracing and reproducing the artwork of the book covers. Enjoy!
NEXT UP.... poems we began writing today. I am sure you will be amazed at the adjectives and onomatopoeias we are using to describe Blyton, our beautiful class kitten!















Wednesday, 19 March 2014

We can write sentences!

In the last week Room 3 have been looking at what makes a sentence. Do you know that a sentence MUST have a capital letter at the start and MUST have a full stop at the end of it? Yes, it does!
There are also different sentence types - simple, compound and complex sentences.
Simple sentence - 'The boy went to the shop'.
Compound sentence - 'The  boy went to the shop because he had to buy some shoes.'
Complex sentence - 'When the boy went to the shop, after he has saved enough money, he brought a             trendy pair of shoes.

We used this photo, and talked about little children running away from home, to base our paragraph of 4-6 sentences on. Each paragraph needed to have a simple, compound and complex sentence in it.
We hope you enjoy our writing. Comments about your favourite sentences that we have written are WELCOME!

Little Tom was so  upset he ran through the bull's paddock by the river and blackberries. He went to his Nana who never told him off for anything. Whenever he goes over there he always gets treats. When he got over to Nana's they then went to milk the cows. Then his mum came over, smacked him and dragged him home!    
By Ethan

Little Tom was so upset he ran away because he pushed his sister Jade over. Ms Betts searched for him. When she found  him chatting away with Nana Marj, she said, "I told you not ran away"! Tom said, "I stayed well away from the creek".  Ms Betts took him home and he never ran away again.   
By Luke

Little Tom was so upset he ran away. He went over the ditch, over the elcetcric fence and over the hill to Nana's house. But then his mum came over to smack his bum and then they went home.  Tom cried all night but he never ran away again. 
By Riley

My little cousin was so upset he found his dad's suitcase, packed his lollies and went to his grandmum's house. When Aunty found out she was mad! When she saw him beside Grandmum, my little cousin said, "I went to grandmums. I went to grandmums because I needed more lollies". My aunty said no candy for a month. Even though Aunty said no candy she doesn't know about the candy floss inside the pillowcase!
By Kimberley

My little brother was so upset he ran away down the road. I could not find him, not in the cowshed, not in the stable. He was nowhere to be found. Then I looked in the fort and found him. I was so relieved that I had found him but I did give him a whack on the bum. That day I was crazy that had happened but happy to know he was safe.
By Sarah









Tuesday, 25 February 2014

Guess, and make up, a story!

Today we ended up doing HEAPS of writing. Ms Betts gave us a photo and some questions to think about. We had to make up a story to go with this picture...

Here are our stories. (There are more to come.) Please click on them once to enlarge them.